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Varied openers

Starting every sentence with the subject gets monotonous. Open this one a fresh way — rewrite it below and get instant coaching on your own words.

Prompt 1 of 3

The flat sentence (starts with the subject)

The dog ran across the yard when it heard the gate.

Openers that work well here: -ing opener (e.g. 'Hearing…'), Subordinate-clause opener (e.g. 'When…')

Strongest choice: -ing opener (e.g. 'Hearing…')