Coach Pen

How it moves a score

See exactly how a score moves.

No vague promises. Here's the actual mechanism — the same marking and coaching you get on your own writing, shown on a sample so you can judge it before you sign up.

The two pens: fix and keep

Every mark-up uses two pens — red for what to change, green for what's already working — with a note in plain language. This is a sample sentence, marked the way Coach Pen marks yours.

The storm was very big and the small boat went across the churning, hungry waves as the sailors were scared.

✗ “very big”, “went”, “were scared” — these tell instead of show. Try towering, lurched, and a detail that shows the fear (white-knuckled grip).

✓ “churning, hungry waves” — vivid and personified. Keep doing this.

What one technique changes

Drill a single skill — here, swapping weak verbs and showing instead of telling — and the same idea lands completely differently.

Before

The storm was very big and the small boat went across the waves as the sailors were scared.

After

The storm towered overhead as the small boat lurched across the churning, hungry waves, and the sailors' knuckles whitened on the rail.

Same writer, same scene — one technique, drilled until it stuck.

The method: mark → drill → re-mark

Improvement isn't one big leap — it's a loop, run on the criterion that's actually holding you back.

01

Mark

Paste your writing. Coach Pen scores it against the real exam rubric and marks up your own words — red for what to fix, green for what's working.

02

Drill

The criterion holding your score back links to a short, stepped lesson that trains exactly that skill — one technique at a time, on real examples.

03

Re-mark

Rewrite and submit again. Watch the same criterion climb, and see the next thing to work on. Repeat until it's automatic.

What learners are saying

Sample — illustrative only

Example quotes while we gather real stories from learners and families.

The coaching is on her own writing, not some worksheet. She finally gets why a sentence works — and her openings have completely changed.
Mark T. · Parent of a Year 6 student
I'd been stuck on band 6.5 for months. Seeing exactly which criterion was holding me back, then drilling just that, got me to a 7.
Priya R. · IELTS candidate
One technique at a time made it feel doable. He stopped dreading the writing task and started treating it like a game.
Sofia L. · Parent, NAPLAN (Year 7)

See it on your own writing.